I have been trying to get feedback on this one written piece I did way back, and still have gotten nothing. But, I am determined to hear advice on what I can do to improve the piece or any errors I had missed to fix. However, I'm not posting it on deviantart, simply go to my LJ and read it. I would greatly appreciate it!!!
[link]If you're going to simply bash it and not tell me what it redemable about it then don't bother.
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Angel-of-Death-3006 aka PSY, KoeiPrincess, Lady Phoenix
"The mind shall vanquish the sword!"
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First Annual Candy [ Cartman x Wendy ] Fanart/Fanfic Contest! Win Handmade South Park Prizes & get featured! Contest ends November 1st 2009!!
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First Annual Candy [ Cartman x Wendy ] Fanart/Fanfic Contest! Win Handmade South Park Prizes & get featured! Contest ends November 1st 2009!!
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Bailey Rabbit
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Everytime you kill, God masturbates a kitten...
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♪~We're all living in the same bowl of soup~♫
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